Six Word Story, After Editing

I wrote this six word story earlier today on Twitter, and I realized that I had made a mistake. A critical mistake.

 

I semicolon-ed where I should have comma-d.

 

It makes a difference. It makes a BIG difference.

 

Even when what you’re doing is only six(ish) words long, editing is very important.

 

So without further ado, the corrected story:

 

He broke rules constantly, even in this.

 

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I write about my science fiction and fantasy writing--and plenty of other things--at sabarton.com

Posted on August 22, 2014, in Things I've Written, Writing and tagged , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. Leave a comment.

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