Six Word Story, After Editing

I wrote this six word story earlier today on Twitter, and I realized that I had made a mistake. A critical mistake.

 

I semicolon-ed where I should have comma-d.

 

It makes a difference. It makes a BIG difference.

 

Even when what you’re doing is only six(ish) words long, editing is very important.

 

So without further ado, the corrected story:

 

He broke rules constantly, even in this.

 

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